You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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Dear Ahmed, I want to clarify why you are complaining about the noise from my flat. All my kids stay inside because of the quarantine and COVID-19 restrictions, even though the schools are closed.

In addition

to the above reason, recently my wife delivered a remarkable girl, always crying without any reason, so all the above reasons made our flat noisy. I sincerely apologize regarding

this

issue and be sure I feel what you feel, and I know with

this

noise, you can not go on with your daily tasks. Rest assured that I will take severe actions to solve

this

complaint as follows 1- I will ensure all my children do not sleep during day time to avoid late sleeping at night. 2- I will inform my wife to keep the new baby in the farther room from your flat. Warm regards,

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

143 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Word Count

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Some people believe that to become successful in sports, one should have a natural talent. Others, however, think that perseverance and practice are more crucial to success. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think it is a positive or negative development ?

It is better for children if the whole family including aunts, uncles and grandparents are involved in a child’s upbringing, rather than just their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What are the main effects of this epidemic?