Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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A group of people tend to think that nowadays we have large scale of various
choices
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in our
life
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. I want to argue that I’m totally agree with
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statement and I will explain it in the following essay. In compared to past decades, today we can see a lot of differences in every aspects of our
life
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. There are various types of facilities and
options
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in every sides of modern
life
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: in everyday
life
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, in science or even in the culture. I want to explain it in an example: In the past, many people tended to have a farm, with extended family. There were about 4-5
children
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with their grand parents. Almost every boy in a farmer family, had to continue his father’s job and there were not a lot of other
choices
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. He became farmer as his father and he stayed at that farm with his wife and
children
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and
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endless circle continued. But nowadays, that young man has a lot of
choices
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: continue his education, get a different job and has his home with his nuclear family.
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none of his family members expect him to continue his father’s job and stay with extended family. There are
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different types of
choices
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in everyday
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and I would argue that most of them are due to technology. I want to continue with that example: please imagine the mother of that farmer family; she had to do many tasks by herself or eighter with her daughters or servants. Some work like taking care of little
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, washing the dishes or clothes, cook meals and etc.
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, she had no time for herself, she had no other
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to decides what to do.
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, a mother in these days, takes her
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to kindergarten, put the dirty dishes and clothes in the machine, orders the meals online etc. I mean all of these are
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that one person can choose them for having more spare time and
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just in spare time, there is a large number of various activities that a person can select to do, because of the technology. In conclusion, I would say that in these days, with all these different facilities, we have many
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to choose. We can do many things and our experiences in doing various types of things, are really incomparable with old times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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