Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Some different
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disappeared from
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world annually. A group of people believe that we shouldn't care about
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subject, since we will be more comfortable in our life with
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languages
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in the world. There are several reasons why I would argue against
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opinion.
First
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of all, every
language
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has a cultural background. With losing a
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, there is no way to understand and use that culture.
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: a primitive group of people live in a small area in Africa. They don't have any
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to
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other countries or foreign people. If their
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dies out by their death, there is no way to understand
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their traditions, their ethnic beliefs or even their everyday life.
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, every
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have
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own information
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like letters or books. By missing their
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, we don't have any way to recognize
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who were they, how
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the
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system worked or how
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the conditions of their social life. Some other negative
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of
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opinion
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that integration is not the proper happening in some issues. Dead ending for some
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is a threat to other
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. A
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with few
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,
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is not
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world to live
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is a totalitarian ward
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like South Korea!
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, no one forced
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others to learn that specific
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, so
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life” cannot be
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reason for forgetting the importance of existing and using various
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. There is a free word, which everyone should use and protect their own
language
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. In conclusion, I would argue that we lose many important things by losing some
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, like freedom and lots of information and we shouldn’t destroy the bridge to
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another worlds
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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