Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Some different
languages
disappeared from language
world annually. A group of people believe that we shouldn't care about Correct article usage
the language
this
subject, since we will be more comfortable in our life with less
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fewer
languages
in the world. There are several reasons why I would argue against this
opinion.
First
of all, every language
has a cultural background. With losing a language
, there is no way to understand and use that culture. For example
: a primitive group of people live in a small area in Africa. They don't have any relationship
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relationships
to
other countries or foreign people. If their Change preposition
with
language
dies out by their death, there is no way to understand about
their traditions, their ethnic beliefs or even their everyday life. Change preposition
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Secondly
, every nations
have Change to a singular noun
nation
their
own information Correct pronoun usage
its
system
like letters or books. By missing their Change the noun form
systems
language
, we don't have any way to recognize that
who were they, how Correct pronoun usage
apply
was
the Unnecessary verb
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economy
system worked or how Replace the word
economic
was
the conditions of their social life.
Some other negative Change the verb form
were
consequences
of Fix the agreement mistake
consequence
this
opinion is
that integration is not the proper happening in some issues. Dead ending for some Change the verb form
are
languages
is a threat to other languages
. A word
with few Correct your spelling
world
languages
,
is not Remove the comma
apply
easy
world to liveAdd an article
an easy
, it
is a totalitarian ward Change preposition
in, it
that is
like South Korea! On the other hand
, no one forced the
others to learn that specific Correct article usage
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language
, so “easier
life” cannot be Correct article usage
an “easier
suitable
reason for forgetting the importance of existing and using various Add an article
a suitable
languages
. There is a free word, which everyone should use and protect their own language
.
In conclusion, I would argue that we lose many important things by losing some languages
, like freedom and lots of information and we shouldn’t destroy the bridge to the
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another worlds
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another world
other worlds
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite