Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Today we can see many signs of globalization in different aspect of
societies
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society
product’s
similarities in Change noun form
product
selling
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the selling
system
in various Use synonyms
countries
is one of the effects of Use synonyms
this
phenomenon, which gives an opportunity to Linking Words
people
around the Use synonyms
world
to buy Use synonyms
same
goods. I will argue that Correct article usage
the same
although
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this
similarity has some negative effects, it can Linking Words
has
important positive consequences.
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have
First
of all, Linking Words
this
development Linking Words
reduce
discrimination in Change the verb form
reduces
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third
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third-world
world
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countries
around the Use synonyms
world
. The selling Use synonyms
system
in developing Use synonyms
countries
is weak and their national Use synonyms
products
have low quality; by inter international goods in their selling Use synonyms
system
, Use synonyms
people
can buy Use synonyms
high quality
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high-quality
products
. Use synonyms
Secondly
, through Linking Words
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this
accessible universal Correct determiner usage
these
products
, national companies get into Use synonyms
a
competition, which Correct article usage
apply
force
them to improve their standards. Change the verb form
forces
Finally
, Linking Words
this
similarity cause closeness Linking Words
of
the citizens of the global village; Change preposition
among
residences
can share their experiences Replace the word
residents
to
others, and they feel they are similar to each other.
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with
On the other hand
, Linking Words
this
phenomenon has some negative consequences on Linking Words
national
economy of small Add an article
the national
countries
. Use synonyms
For instance
, many Linking Words
people
produce special Use synonyms
kind
of Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
products
, which produce in small studios; through Use synonyms
this
development, Linking Words
people
don’t buy their goods anymore, because they are not enough good in Use synonyms
compare
to foreign Replace the word
comparison
products
. Inflation is another negative effect of globalization Use synonyms
in
Change preposition
on
selling
Correct article usage
the selling
system
: Use synonyms
products
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of
abroad Change preposition
from
countries
are expensive in developing Use synonyms
countries
and Importing Use synonyms
of
these Change preposition
apply
products
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increase
the inflation rate. Culture is another important factor that may Correct subject-verb agreement
increases
affected
by Change the verb form
be affected
this
selling Linking Words
system
; Use synonyms
for example
, during Linking Words
Correct determiner usage
this
the
time, Correct your spelling
this
new
generation Correct article usage
the new
forget
about their traditional clothes and replace Change the verb form
forgets
T-shirt
and jeans Fix the agreement mistake
T-shirts
instead
of them.
In conclusion, Linking Words
although
globalization in selling Linking Words
system
and similarity in Use synonyms
products
around the Use synonyms
world
has some negative aspects, I believe that positive points overcome its drawbacksUse synonyms
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