Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. 1. Apologize for damaging the product 2. Explain what happened 3. Say how are you going to fix the issue

Dear Emily, ,Sorry it's taken me so long to write to you but at ,

last

I put pen to paper to explain why I haven't returned that DIY

book

I borrowed from you. To be honest, I've been feeling so guilty that I delayed writing to you. I have to own up that I damaged the

book

accidentally. I'm so very sorry. I know how important that

book

is to you as it was passed down from your late father. What happened is that I had been reading up on the chapter about DIY plumbing when I knocked over my cup of coffee which splashed all over the

book

. Most of the stain is on the pages that were open at the time. I've sent the

book

away to be repaired. I didn't realise that was even possible until I researched it. Anyway, it should be as good as new when I get it back

week and

then

I'll send it on to you. Again, I'm so sorry for the delay in telling you. I hope you can forgive me. Best wishes John

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