Some people say that olympic games do not have any role to play in society. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

Sport is very important in our life. It should be our habit from
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childhood
choldhood
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childhood
. All sportsmen have competitions that start from a little one and growth
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games
.
Olympic
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The Olympic
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games
are very popular all over the world.
Olympic
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The Olympic
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games
are famous and well-known in all counties. On the one
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games
are
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opportunity to spend time together. People become close to each other. It is the opportunity to get
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acquainted
and to find friends.
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it is always a freight.
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