Some think increasing business and cultural contact between nations is positive. Others think it leads to the disappearance of the national identity. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.
Some
people
believe that the development of business and cultural cooperation between different countries leads to positive effects. Use synonyms
However
, others think that it affects Linking Words
uniqueness
of the national identity. In my opinion, Correct article usage
the uniqueness
the
globalization only benefits all societies across the world, so it only improves strong parts of culture.
On the one hand, when enterprises collaborate with partners in different countries, they exchange valuable information and discover new ways to produce goods cheaper and in the best condition. Correct article usage
apply
For instance
, a lot of businesses outsource production to Chinese factories because it empowers entrepreneurs to sell products cheaper in many emerging countries. The other benefit is Linking Words
an
ability to exchange cultural aspects Correct article usage
the
such
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cuisine. Even a medium-sized town provides a variety of restaurants with dishes that without globalization we would experience only being in a country by ourselves.
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On the other hand
, cultural uniqueness could seriously suffer from international Linking Words
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. Fix the agreement mistake
contact
People
tend to adopt traditions and rituals from other nations which they usually like. Use synonyms
For example
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concerned
more about Add a missing verb
been concerned
country's
identity, we would have not adopted junk food Correct article usage
the country's
such
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McDonalds
which replaced traditional dishes. Junk food was popularized in the USChange to a genitive case
McDonald's
,
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apply
lately
became highly available in the global market with Replace the word
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rising
popularity of Add an article
the rising
the
American culture.
In conclusion, I would like to emphasize that cultural exchange is an essential part of modern life as well as international cooperation in business. I truly believe that it helps Correct article usage
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people
to live in a better environment, but it has some tradeoffs.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite