It is cruel to keep animals in zoos. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

An animal is a living being that deserves respect, sadly there are people who do not comply with

this

, but that

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in the

zoo

can be good and

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at a certain point. But well, aside from all that, an animal can be happy inside a

zoo

, most of the

animals

that are in a

zoo

are not to generate income for a

zoo

, but because in their natural habitat they were about to die, whether they had problems motor or mental.

On the other hand

, there are zoos that take over

animals

to generate spectacle, which is very bad, and

that is

where they would become cruel, it would be against the moral principles that almost all of us have. but being realistic most

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zoos act for the benefit of the

animals

which after a time of training return them to their natural habitat,

although

people think it is cruel, it is the best thing for the

animals

because being outside they were in danger of leaving to exist. Now talking about what I think is that I almost completely disagree with the idea that it is cruel to keep

animals

in the

zoo

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because it is giving them a

second

chance so that they can stay alive and in the future return

them

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to their natural habitat, so they are happy and believe it or not, there are zoos so that they feel accompanied by visits from tourists who play or feed the

animals

.