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it is generally believed that success in fields such as arts and sports can only be achieved if a person has natural talent. However ,its sometimes claimed that any child can be thought to become a good sports person or artist. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In
this
 essay, I will be deliberating on how a great difference in
age
 between parents and children may be considered more beneficial than less of a difference. Through
this
 short analysis, I will demonstrate how there are repercussions
as a result
 of
age
 differences between the young and their nurturers.
To begin
 with, youths that grow up with adults that are of a significantly different
age
 than them are often able to display a high level of emotional intelligence.
This
 is in large part due to being involved in discourses that transcend their young
age
 and the need to be able to grow up with, understand and empathise with their guardians.
However
, the above is where the positives stop. There are various studies that illustrate how a large
age
 gap can have a plethora of adverse effects:
for example
, a stark contrast in years leads to an inability for parents to comprehend their children's needs
as a result
 of changing cultures, social pressures, and in some instances technological innovations.
For instance
, a study conducted by Oxford University's educational sector found that significant
age
 discrepancies often lead to mental health issues in young people,
such
 as bipolar disorder To summarise, while there are benefits to having an
age
 gap - enhanced empathy,
for example
 - there are far too many disadvantages
against
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such
 a
gape
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. Ultimately, it is abundantly clear that a smaller gap in
age
 between parents and children is preferable and it would
also
 help in fostering a more congenial and amicable relationship.
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