You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisemnt for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter . Describe the training course you want to do . Explain what the company could do to help you . Say how the course will be useful for your job

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Dear Mr John, I am writing to notify you about a social media and digital marketing course I would like to attend.It will be held during the
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week of
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month,November.It will be conducted in Beijing for seven days Since I need to be physically present, I am sincerely requesting to be excused from company engagements during that time.Because of
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, I can make sure to send all the presentations to my supervisor via email.
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, I would like the company to help me pay the course tuition of 5000¥ from the employee development initiative program.
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training will enhance my skills in digital marketing.
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can improve our social media presence
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,more customers in the long run.
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,my knowledge would
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enable me to coach and educate my fellow co-workers.
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will not only benefit me but the entire organization. Looking forward to your kind consideration. Yours Sincerely Miriam
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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