In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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building new railroads for sake of incredibly fast trains. Change preposition
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In contrast
, there are some opinions that it is necessary to have financial investments in updating the current public Linking Words
transport
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money
on both aspects simultaneously.
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Firstly
, building more railroads is crucial because it helps Linking Words
people
, especially businessmen or women who have to work in different cities, (to) move faster between cities. To illustrate, busy Use synonyms
people
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such
as businessmen or women having busy schedules in different areas had to transfer to Nha Trang city fast as possible. Normally, an old train may take 6-7 hours for transporting from HCM city to Nha Trang while high-speed rail can improve that by completing in only 2 hours. Linking Words
Furthermore
, moving faster allows Linking Words
people
to reduce the waste of time while waiting for transit.
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money
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spent on improving existing public Linking Words
transport
because the reach of railway lines is limited. The new railway can’t be constructed everywhere in the city. Plus, it costs too much. In Use synonyms
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case, what can be better than focusing on the existing public Linking Words
transport
systems in advance? The more improved public Use synonyms
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leads to the fact that Linking Words
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don’t mind being kept waiting during some stages of using Use synonyms
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kind of mobility. More importantly, if the quality of eco-friendly buses is updated, not only will Linking Words
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be cleaner.
In conclusion, I believe that constructing a new railway and improving current public Linking Words
transport
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equally important for busy Change the verb form
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people
to take care of their careers as well as possible. What actually matters is that the states and the private sectors should consider how much Use synonyms
money
they ought to spend on each aspect according to the current infrastructures and the countries’ economic situations before taking action.Use synonyms
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