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nowadays alot of people are able to do their work from home.discuss advantages and disadvantages.

In the contemporary ethos, it is the era of the IT revolution where most of the jobs can be performed using the internet,
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 there should not be any restriction on physical presence and people could work from
home
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 too. Of course, there are certain demerits of the same, but in my opinion, the advantages
overweigh
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 over disadvantages as perused
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, it saves
time
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 and money for employees as they do not waste
time
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 commuting and save their expenditure on transportation,
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, they can allocate
this
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 extra
time
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 to their families and aid them in daily house chores and spend with their children.
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,
while
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 I was working from
home
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 during the
covid
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COVID-19
 pandemic, I used to spend a few more hours with my family which has enhanced my work-life balance.
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, the company
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 has few benefits like no need to build big offices as expensive land prices are exorbitant and even maintenance.
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, there will be less traffic on the roads, so, less pollution.
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, people have to spend money on internet connection and electronic gadgets like computers, laptops, headphones etc. and in case of disruption in the internet
network
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 or electricity, their work may
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 impacted.
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, many individuals working in outskirt areas are often disconnected from online meetings
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network
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 issues and it wastes the
time
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 of other attendees.
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, as employees are working away from the office, it is difficult to supervise them and the management has to depend on mutual trust only. In conclusion, working from
home
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 has several advantages of
time
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 and money
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 benefits to the environment, but it has the limitation of
network
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 issues and electricity problems,
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 they can be resolved with better
network
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 connectivity and battery backup computers. So, in
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 aspect, working from
home
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 brings more advantages to society than disadvantages.

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