Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Other believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to schoolwork, which of the two approaches do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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With no argument, the busy lifestyle of
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affects adversely their
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. The question, of how to spend quality
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with kids, which is always a debatable topic has now become more controversial. Most
parents
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think that their valuable
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should devote to making
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happy by entertaining them while others like to support their scion in their
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. Though both thinkings have positive and negative sides, I personally believe the former notion is more rational. I will elaborate
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viewpoint in the subsequent paragraphs
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leading to a logical conclusion.
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, Childhood is the
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when kids need their
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to care
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support
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. In
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modern world, many
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are extremely engaged because of lots of reasons like work stress, household work, career development
studies
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and so on. The minimum
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that caregivers get to spend with their offspring must use wisely.
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must use the
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for
fun
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. It’s a long-lasting memory for a child.
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, if mom and dad take
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to the beach or park regularly and have
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with
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, they always remember the happy moments in their life.
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is the best way to create a strong bonding between them rather than forcing them for
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during that
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.
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, parent-child positive bonding is essential to reduce
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children
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's mental stress. Much research shows that, because of the weak parent-child relationships, students face many physical as well as mental troubles that negatively impact their
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bond can build up through different types of activities rather than curbing them for academic
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. To clear the matter,
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can acquire many values and knowledge from books through
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ways of learning.
Parents
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can choose
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activities as well for bringing up their
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.
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, if
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take their
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to an orphanage and encourage kids to play with the other orphans,
children
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enjoy the
fun
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and unknowingly,
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teach them humanity and moral values. The child never forgets
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, and later
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they grow as a good and responsible citizen. To summarize, how to use up
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time
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for
children
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depends on each parent. But in my opinion, all the
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should find quality
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and must make it an unforgettable experience for both
parents
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and
children
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.
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