Mrs Barret, an English speaking woman who lives in your town has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barret. In your letter suggest how you could help her in her home Say why you would like to do the work Explain when you will and will not be available

Dear Mrs Barrett, I am Saloni Patel and I live in the Akshar society which is nearer to your house. I am writing
this
to you to apply for the advertisement you gave in the Times of India. I am excellent at household chores and every family member appreciated
this
skill of mine.
Moreover
, I have good culinary skills as my all friends praise my dishes and always tell me that I prepare delicious food.
Furthermore
, I love to spend time with children and
also
easily manage my work along with their care. As I mentioned above I have all the good qualities, which should require by you to hire a person at home. Apart from it, my previous owner where I had worked for 2 years moved to a new state and owing to
such
reasons I left my job. So, it would be better for me if I would be selected. I
also
want approval from your side for one thing before you approve my application we already will plan to visit Niagara beach during the summer vacation of my children. So, I will not available for a week
this
summer. I hope you would understand the situation. Kindly wait for your favourable reply. Yours sincerely, Saloni Patel
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