People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.

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In human history, work has always played a fundamental role. After the

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industrial revolution in England in the XVIII century,

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started to spend most of their time working. Someone argue that

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go to their job because they need money to live. Obviously, I agree with

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statement, but I think that there are other reasons behind

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I will explain them with specific examples.

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, a considerable number of individuals go to their workplaces because they love to do it. In order to understand

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's stories. Usually, they grew up with the dream of becoming a professional football player, a soldier or a teacher, and when they realize it, they start to be very passionate about their profession. The most concrete example is the famous quote that says "Find a job that you love, and you will never work one day".

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is my favourite vision of the job.

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, there is another motivation that can move human beings to pursue their career, and it is fear.

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but is largely common in our society. Nowadays a lot of individuals choose a craft that they don't really like and

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happens because they do not want to disappoint their family, especially their

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. It is common that

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too much pressure on the shoulders of their sons, by choosing

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their college and career. In order to make their

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proud of them, youngsters forget about their real passions. An example is famous

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's sons, that follow the path of their successful

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because they want to make them proud, but most of the time

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not the right path for them and they become sad and depressed. To conclude, despite the main reason why

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work is that they need money to live, there are

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as they follow their passion or their dream and

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

340 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Intrinsic Motivation
Social Connections
Professional Growth
Societal Contribution
Work-Life Balance
Job Satisfaction
Networking Opportunities
Community Impact
Skill Enhancement
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People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.

Fully explain your ideas

With the growing population of cities, more and more people live in homes that have little or no outdoor area. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

More and more people are using computers and electric devices to access information, therefore there is no need for printed books, magazines and newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (Technology)

Coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

Write a letter to the manager of the HR department of a company requesting information about the interview that you attended but still waiting for results. In your letter, * describe the position you applied for * why you think the interview went well * why you need the result of the interview

Your local travel agent recommended a place to visit and you are now having a good time there. Write a letter to your travel agent and tell them the following: what you have been doing; what you hope to do before the end of your holiday; say why you like this place.