Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A large number of governments, tend to think that the most important goal for them is economic progress, while other people believe that other

issues

in the society are important as

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equal

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the

economy

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a

country

. I would argue that

although

the

economy

has an important role in a

country

,

but

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there are other

issues

that the

government

should pay attention to them like

economy

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the economy

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.

Economy

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has

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main role in every

country

. It has significant effects on various parts of a

country

, and it has short-term and long-term consequences on the resident’s life.

For example

, every resident wants to live in a stable economic state.

This

stability offers them to have economic plans for their life,

such

as buying a home or even expanding their family and having a baby. The

economy

also

has a key role in the everyday life: people should be able to buy their needs. The

government

should be able to make a safe situation for their residents to have no problem in the economic zone,

thus

the

government

should concentrate on economic progress. Nowadays, in an overview, we can see various kinds of phenomena, which need governmental support.

For instance

, the environment is one of the most important

progresses

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that

government

should have a long-term schedule for

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since it is very important and without sufficient plans, it can put a

country

in a worse situation, with some dangerous

issues

like the lack of water.

Furthermore

, every

country

should be aware of some social

issues

and have enough plans for them.

For instance

, one of the most common problems in

the

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developed countries

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is the lack of the young generation and the population decrease.

This

problem should be handled by the

government

and they should solve it as soon as possible

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because avoiding solving the social problems at the right time, has some negative impacts on different aspects of the

country

, which are not easy at all to solve. In conclusion,

although

the

economy

is one of the most important

issues

in every

country

, and

government

should look at it as their golden goal,

but

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I believe that some

progresses

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are

also

important too, and

government

should follow these goals too. Some social and environmental progresses, like lack of water or decreasing the population.