Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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A large number of governments, tend to think that the most important goal for them is economic progress, while other people believe that other
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in the society are important as
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the
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a
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. I would argue that
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the
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has an important role in a
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there are other
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that the
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should pay attention to them like
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economy
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the economy
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Economy
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has
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main role in every
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. It has significant effects on various parts of a
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, and it has short-term and long-term consequences on the resident’s life.
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, every resident wants to live in a stable economic state.
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stability offers them to have economic plans for their life,
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as buying a home or even expanding their family and having a baby. The
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has a key role in the everyday life: people should be able to buy their needs. The
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should be able to make a safe situation for their residents to have no problem in the economic zone,
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the
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should concentrate on economic progress. Nowadays, in an overview, we can see various kinds of phenomena, which need governmental support.
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, the environment is one of the most important
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progress
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that
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should have a long-term schedule for
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since it is very important and without sufficient plans, it can put a
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in a worse situation, with some dangerous
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like the lack of water.
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, every
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should be aware of some social
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and have enough plans for them.
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, one of the most common problems in
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developed countries
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is the lack of the young generation and the population decrease.
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problem should be handled by the
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and they should solve it as soon as possible
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because avoiding solving the social problems at the right time, has some negative impacts on different aspects of the
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, which are not easy at all to solve. In conclusion,
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the
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is one of the most important
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in every
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, and
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should look at it as their golden goal,
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I believe that some
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are
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important too, and
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should follow these goals too. Some social and environmental progresses, like lack of water or decreasing the population.
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