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the advance of science and technology has a significant impact on people, but the role of artists is also important, such as musicians, painters and writers. What can the arts tell us about life that science cannot?

Unarguably, the improvement in
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 owes much to technical advances, which are driven by
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. So important is
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 that the functions of
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 are contested by many
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. I believe that the
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 can convey some messages that
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 can never be able to convey. The
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 represent human thoughts, whereas
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 represents natural order.
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, the
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 lead
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 to perceive the world while
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 is aimed at discovering the nature of things. What has been found true in
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 would hardly alter, unless sufficient evidence can be cited to challenge or overrule the established theories and principles.
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, what has been conveyed by a work of
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 is neither right nor wrong, and can be given different meanings by different
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.
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 sometimes treats a new theory as
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erratic and stresses conforming to existing rules and pursuing accuracy.
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 is about exploring the undiscovered but existing,
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 to the
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, which are interested in exploring both the undiscovered and the nonexistent. In simple terms, the
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 encourage individuality and creativity, whereas
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 respects conformance. Another major distinction is that the
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 draw attention to issues that are unique in a particular society, while
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 attaches importance to the issues that are of interest to mankind as a whole. Contrary to popular belief, artwork does not necessarily aesthetically appeal to a majority of viewers. An artist's primary motive is not only to pursue the aesthetic in the popular mind but
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 to remind
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 that they cannot afford to ignore,
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, religion, politics, morality, and so forth. A scientific breakthrough,
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, brings benefits that can be shared by the whole human society, but
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 unique in any specific community. The
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 give
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 a sense of cultural background and identity, as a key component of any culture in the world.
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 are
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 to
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, regardless of nationality, race and ethnicity,
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 has long been a way of passing ideas, concepts, beliefs, values and ways of seeing things to later generations. Because of
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,
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 can be classified into different social and cultural groups. In conclusion, the
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 differ from
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 in many aspects and because of it,
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 know more about the world in which they live and get an insight into the society, culture and themselves. While
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 is objective and based on predetermined guides,
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 is inherent in the human mind and subjective.

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