Today, many people use the internet and smartphones to transfer money to friends, family, and businesses. Is this a positive or negative development?
In today’s modern world, lots of people
transfer
their money
for trading, job or family with their phone and network connection, which I see as a benefit for our society and in this
essay I discussed two of my reasons.
To begin
with, there are many banks in our world and each person is using one of them the problem is we can not expect our bank
to be everywhere we need because it is impossible. Therefore
, we can not spend time
and money
transfers to the bank
every time
, especially when they are far from us. For example
, I want to do business in a foreign country and my bank
does not have any branches there, in this
situation online banking will help me can transfer
my money
with only an internet connection because reaching the bank
in person is impossible for me at that time
.
In addition
, using electronic transfer
can let us do it every time
of the day and year even on weekends. Thus
, we should not be worried about bank
working times or any holiday closings. For instance
, tonight is Christmas and my son needs money
to reach home, but it is 11 o’clock and every bank
is closed for an hour. However
, the internet does not have a closing time
which I can use anytime I want. As a result
, this
technology can give me this
access to transfer
my money
any time
of the year, even on holidays.
To conclude, the internet makes our life easier by giving us the ability to transfer
and do online banking without going to the bank
or being worried about the bank
’s working time
which in my opinion, is really beneficial for every human.Submitted by jaberi.mahyar on
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