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Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion?

#people #computers #life
According to
last
 decades, new
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technologies
tchnologies
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technologies
 and devices are becoming the most convenient and efficient way of doing our
works
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 and duties.
Besides
 these benefits, they can bring some mental and psychological problems by using them more than normal. on the one hand, nowadays every individual can shop online, stay in contact with their friends and relatives and
also
 do their assignments and tasks online from home. as a whole, you just need
a
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modern
equipments
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equipment
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 of digital gadgets with a good connection
of
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 internet and a basic knowledge of operating the system. after that, all your works and learning issues and tasks related to you
carrer
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career
 can be done more
effeciently
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efficiently
 through the pack of the digital gadgets and the internet.
on the other hand
,
disadvantages
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which
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technologies
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technology
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brings
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 to human beings can
be overshadow
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its
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their
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 merits.
for instance
, sitting too much
of
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time working with computers can affect your mental and physical health. it can fall
your
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 eyesight and have some detrimental impacts on your backbone.
in addition
, it may shorten your focus span and demolish your
mentality
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 properties
such
 as creativity. In conclusion,
although
 we should consider the fact that
computer
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 and the internet can help us to improve
our
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 efficiency and workability of our tasks, I think it
make
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a
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 awful situation if we don't handle and manage the usage of these modern gadgets. we
also
 should pay
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attention
attension
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attention
 to our mental and physical health
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