To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population, a country should make use of edible insects as a food source. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but harvesting them will also negatively affect nature. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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opinion, its cons could never overshadow its pros .Discussed below are several benefits as well as

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interesting dishes .And it is a part of their

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lives from the past .

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that when

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eat

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species which is small but very important to

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as well as human life .

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that they have

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role in agriculture .

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