In some countries, young people have become richer, healthier, and live longer, but they are less happy . What the causes ? What can be done to address this situation ?

In recent years,

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has become

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broad to the general public . Some noticeable say that they have become richer,

healthier

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and healthier

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as well as live longer but one problem are coexist

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they are

unhappily

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. The impact of

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has not been realized by many residents. Discussed below are several causes as well as effects of

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.

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and foremost ,

people

should recognise that there are several main reasons supporting the idea that

young

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generation

have

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become

better

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a better

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version.

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very important to consider that

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nowadays

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nowadays

the development of social media and technology

are

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increasingly significant. Every age can have

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state of the art facilities easily

such

as

smart phone

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smartphone

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or

laptop

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.

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means that youngsters can use some platform to make money by

become

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a

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influence or marketing

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sales

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illustrate

illustate

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illustrate

that point I would like to mention that

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young use Tiktok and Facebook

like

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a

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e-commercial to exchange products like

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clothes

clother

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clothes

or

cosmetic

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is because of the fact that

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kind of app

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many

user

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around the world so it

bring

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many benefits for

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users

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like searching for something they want to buy and

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it necessary with a

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amount

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of type and cost. It is very

convinience

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convenience

convenient

and comfortable for

saler

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sales

to get

profit

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a profit

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.

Besisdes

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Besides

, youngster nows

aday

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a day

have

oppurtuinity

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opportunity

to live in

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modern life so they can use

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healthy and balance products to enhance their nutrients which brings advantages for their beauty and their body . The

reasons

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is

becaues

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because

they have

basic

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knowledge to understand and

aware

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from

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bad things . There are many serious effects of

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. One primary effect would be that

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they

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live

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without

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happily

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. We need some solutions to get away from

this

problem. One primary solution is that

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government

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the gorvenment

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gorvenment

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government

should

band

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ban

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advertising

advertisisng

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advertising

and encourage

people

to be active

in

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example

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in

sport

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and

music

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that

thay

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they

should not passive consumers of the latest products.

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may have

people

limited to

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in some screen activities and

joined

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in many

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outdoor

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out door

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activities

activies

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activities

to make friends and enjoy

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meaningful

live

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. In conclusion, the

above mentioned

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facts have outlined the reasons as well as the measures

of

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this

issue

. Its causes and effects should be taken into account .

People

should have

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further

futher

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further

consideration on

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issue