The internet is probably the most significant invention of the last 30 years. Without it, our lives would be completely different. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

The

internet

can be the most important development in these 30 years. If the

internet

did not exist, It was a large difference in our lives. I will talk about the reason of what is the point of agreeing or disagreeing.

First

, there is no

one

who does not

use

the

internet

. I think it is the conclusion of why the

internet

is a significant invention. Now,

people

use

the

internet

to search for and learn things

such

as mathematics, English, politics, mechanical systems and so on. There are a lot of materials to

study

which we want. Actually, some

people

study

online at University. They can save their move

time

and waste it on sports and anything else. So, I think the

internet

helps us to

study

or save

time

.

This

is the reason why

people

use

the

internet

. The

people

who say that it is not

one

of the most important inventions think that children play games on the

internet

and it is an obstacle to studies. Some young

people

use

a huge

time

playing games or seeing social media. I was

one

of these

people

. A year before, when the world was

a

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with COVID, my university decided to do the classes online. But, I did not

study

a lot and I saw only social media. But

i

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think it depends on the parents. How they can limit the

internet

without Their child fell bad

.

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Overall, The

internet

affects us. All

people

are helped by the

internet

not only by studying but

also

by saving

time

. The conclusion is that the

internet

is

one

of the most important inventions that mankind did.