Write a letter to your manager complaining about parking situation at work. In your letter, you should: describe the problems are explain why should solve the problems suggest how to solve the problems.

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Dear Sir, My name is Gurmit Singh. I am writing

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letter to draw your immediate attention to the worst parking conditions at our workplace. For the

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, two months I have been observing that employees of other organizations park their vehicles on our company premises without any intimation,

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, it become challenging for us to find a space to park our cars. As you know that recently one of our colleague's cars was stolen, because, due to lack of sparking space he had parked his car away from our workplace and the area was not covered by CCTV cameras,

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, in our parking ,area we have all safety parameters.

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, it is crucial to resolve the issue as soon as possible. I would like to suggest that you should appoint a security guard who will check the identity proof of all the workers and only allow our organization's employees to use our parking space. I hope it will be really helpful for all team members. I am looking forward to your prompt action. Yours sincerely.

gurmit.150Mon Oct 24 2022

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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180 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

parking conflicts
insufficient parking
limited parking spaces
tardiness
security concerns
vehicle safety
workplace morale
employee satisfaction
rotating parking schedule
feasible solutions
remote parking location
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