You recently took a trip with a taxi company. The driver behaved in an unacceptable way and you had a lot of problems. You complained to the company but no-one has replied to your complaint. Write a letter to the taxi company. In your letter say why you are writing and how you feel explain what happened tell them what you would like them to do.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you in order to show my deep dissatisfaction regarding my recent drive provided by your taxi company.
First
of all, the driver accepted my request and needed to arrive
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approximately
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in 10 minutes,
however
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I
have
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waited for
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half an hour, making a bad
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expression of
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service. Not only
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this
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was just quite uncomfortable to wait
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I was late for my business meeting. To make matters even worse, when the driver arrived his behaviour was absolutely unacceptable due to his rude expressions towards me. The whole drive was a big stress for me
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since the driver would not stop exclaiming leading to my absolute disappointment. I am requesting from your taxi company a full refund and a coupon for the
next
drives
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. Thank you
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your time and assistance in advance and looking forward to your reply at your earlier convenience. Yours faithfully, Anastasija Ponomariova
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