Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, the high sales of popular consumer products are due to the

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of commercials and not to the substantial needs of them that live

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where they are sold. I strongly believe that advertising

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owning to a reason. Commercials have

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influence on persuading people to purchase their product for two reasons.

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and foremost, they are more invasive than in the past. we

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to massive commercials in our daily lives,

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as billboards on the street and banner

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in

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most

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markets.

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, they can affect people’s

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unconsciously to feel they need advertised goods

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as wireless headphones which are so popular these days.

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, the know-how

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advertising

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progressed significantly. They have learned more tricks to combine with advertisements in order to be more influential on individuals.

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, they are utilizing attractive jingles,

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and appealing

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slogans to stick

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individual’s

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mind.

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, customers will be engrossed

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purchasing new items. From my perspective, the

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is a key contributor which

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advertising

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to grow. These days approximately all people throughout the world have access to the

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and it has turned into a useful platform for

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. Advertising companies are sharing their adverts

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the virtual world.

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, we are faced with numerous popup

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. It means that

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they have been more able to convince us to purchase their goods without real needs.

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, when we are surfing the

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and see

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which are shown delicious foods in a restaurant, we are pushing to go and eat that food. In conclusion, promoting in selling products is the result of the

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in

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advertisements, and not the real needs of customers since they are found

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everywhere

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every where

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and new

approach

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to be more effective

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being taken. From my point of view, it has

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because of the

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which

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people to consume

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services.