In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers/books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is often argued that in some years anyone will
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acquire
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printed stuff
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books
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, newspapers or magazines due to people will find it online for free.
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situation could be dramatic for independent libraries, I support that the population could have all of these
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the Net for free. It
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that not all individuals have the same economic
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to buy all the
books
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or publications that they want. The economic
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, which are related
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a variety of causes
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, wage,
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, are crucial in people’s
accesibility
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accessibility
to
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type of material.
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, if people do not have enough money to enjoy a meal outdoors or have to make a decision between
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a book or going
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shopping
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shopping
to purchase two kilograms of pasta and milk, they will not choose the book, as interesting as it may be.
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, it is well known that we are suffering the effects of climate change with a diversity of climatic catastrophes
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temperatures. The population have to make
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decisions
decicions
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to reduce sharply the impact on the earth. For
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reason, if factories do not produce
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, a lot of trees will be
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it.
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, the majority of
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300 to 600 pages per book.
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quantity of sheets is a huge influence on the massive forest logging. To conclude, I agree with
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printed paper stuff and
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the availability of online
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to contribute to
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the negative repercussion
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climate change.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite
Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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