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The diagram illustrates the number of Australian
men
 and
women
, who performed regular physical activity in 2010. In general, while
women
, ageing in between 25 and above, have been more physically active throughout the period in question than
men
, the latter, who are between the
age
group
 of 15 and 24, are more active than their counterparts.
Furthermore
, the
age
group
 65 and above, experienced nearly a similar proportion of both
men
 and
women
 indulging in physical exercise with 46.70% and 47.10% respectively. Regarding the
women
, of all
women
, the
age
group
 45 to 54 witnessed the most participation at 53.30%, while the
age
group
 35-44 saw minimal participation from the
women
 at 39.50%.
Furthermore
, the senior
women
, who fall under 35 and above, in the sample have been more active in the year 2010 than their younger counterparts. As for
men
, physical activity is most popular among
men
ageing
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aged
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 between 15 to 24,
although
men
, ageing in between 35 and 44, are most inactive in the lot at 39.50%.
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