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Some people think that parents should tell stories or read to their children. However, others believe that these days this isn't necessary as children have so many other sources for stories, such as books, films and TV. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people believe that in today’s modern times, with increased
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 to various forms of entertainment, it is no longer necessary for
parents
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 to spend
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 reading to
children
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 or telling them
stories
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. While it may be true that
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 today have
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 to more stimulation than ever before, I fear
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 argument overlooks the many other benefits of
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time
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 to both the
children
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 and
parents
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. The increased availability of a variety of
stories
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 through varied platforms gives
children
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 of all ages greater
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 to new and exciting worlds. Where
parents
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 would traditionally be able to share one or two
stories
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 in a day, a child today can engage with a different
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 every hour or two.
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 helps build creativity and grows a child’s sense of the
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 around them. Because of the range of mediums,
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 learn to interpret and engage with a
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 through other senses beyond just listening. The improved graphics in TV and movies have opened up whole worlds of characters that come to life in a new and exciting way not previously possible.
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, an in-person
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 allows
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 to interact with it - asking questions, adding their own creative input and immersing themselves in
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 new
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, with their
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 along for the adventure. The interpersonal nature of reading to a child allows them to use their own imagination to create a visual
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 for the
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, an important form of creative expression for growing minds. The aspect of
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 spent together is
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 important to a child’s development. In a
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 where
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 spend
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 alone with screens for stimulation from a very young age, it’s important that they
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 receive one-on-one
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 with
parents
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 to develop interpersonal skills and meaningful relationships. There is no denying that
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 to a wide range of stimulation for
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 can provide many of the benefits of traditional storytelling
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 as stimulating concentration, imagination and curiosity., but in my opinion, it is not a replacement for the tradition of telling
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. One-on-one
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, interaction and a different form of creative expression are only some of these benefits that would be lost if we left all forms of entertainment up to books, TV or movies.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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