Some feel that individuals should try to assimilate completely to the country where they live while others feel it is more important to preserve their native culture. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In today’s world, groups of people believe that each person has to focus and learn fully about their living

place

,

however

, others think it is more important to gain

knowledge

about your ethnicity and the

place

you came from. In my opinion, knowing about your past

culture

is more important than the country you are living in right now, and

this

essay discussed both views. On the one hand, the

first

group believes that when we live in a country and use its services in our life, our responsibility is to learn about that country's

culture

and

history

.

Therefore

, each person has to keep the priority to learn about their living

place

.

For example

, right now I am living in Canada for 2 years and from those people's, perspective I have to learn about Canadian

history

and

culture

.

As a result

, gaining

knowledge

of our living

place

should be the

first

option for residents.

However

,

on the other hand

, others think knowing about our ethnicity and native

history

is more important than the living

place

.

Hence

, individuals should

first

complete their research about their nationality’s

culture

and

history

.

For instance

, my cousin was born in Canada but she was always serious about learning about her background because she believed that it is more important to

first

improve your

knowledge

about your ethnicity and native

culture

. Which shows the importance of native

history

for these groups of people. In conclusion, on the one ,hand they believe we have to complete our

knowledge

about our living, but

on the

contrary

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others think knowing about our past

culture

is more important and in my opinion is more closely related to the

second

group which is about native

culture

.