Some feel that individuals should try to assimilate completely to the country where they live while others feel it is more important to preserve their native culture. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In today’s world, groups of people believe that each person has to focus and learn fully about their living

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, others think it is more important to gain

knowledge

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about your ethnicity and the

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you came from. In my opinion, knowing about your past

culture

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is more important than the country you are living in right now, and

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essay discussed both views. On the one hand, the

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group believes that when we live in a country and use its services in our life, our responsibility is to learn about that country's

culture

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and

history

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, each person has to keep the priority to learn about their living

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, right now I am living in Canada for 2 years and from those people's, perspective I have to learn about Canadian

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and

culture

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, gaining

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of our living

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should be the

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first

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option for residents.

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,

on the other hand

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, others think knowing about our ethnicity and native

history

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is more important than the living

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.

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, individuals should

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first

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complete their research about their nationality’s

culture

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and

history

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, my cousin was born in Canada but she was always serious about learning about her background because she believed that it is more important to

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first

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improve your

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about your ethnicity and native

culture

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. Which shows the importance of native

history

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for these groups of people. In conclusion, on the one ,hand they believe we have to complete our

knowledge

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about our living, but

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others think knowing about our past

culture

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is more important and in my opinion is more closely related to the

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group which is about native

culture

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