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has gained

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clout and is now dominating the news industry.

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used to be the most

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today has been less important and should be substituted with

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medium. The following paragraphs contain my opinion about why I believe

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is not useful as it was decades ago.

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, I believe that the lack of convenience explains the unimportance of

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paper to print down the content, deliver the paper to each shop or customer, and

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of hard work to do for letting the customer purchase the

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can easily be sent to customers by just clicking the send button and can easily be modified afterwards in case there was

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information

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, since it takes a day until each customer reads the news, some

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today is baseball, and every night at 10pm there is a tv program called “Sports Navi” that highlights all the pro baseball matches. Every score of the game held in Japan and interviews are revealed during

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program and similar content can be found on a related sports media page. It would be

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of the population in Japan is above 60 years old, I am assuming that there are still many elderly people who have not adapted yet to achieve

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via

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. I believe that the

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industry will not be dominant as it was several decades ago but still co-exists with the digital medium due to its few demands.

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