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The following image illustrates the scheme of a typical living house and the possible ways of airflows, causing the houses’ heat loss. In accordance with air movements,

The following image illustrates the scheme of a typical living
house
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 and the possible ways of
airflows
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airflow
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,
causing
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 the houses’ heat loss. In accordance with
air
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 movements, the building could be separated
to
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into
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air
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 inflow zones, which are presented with the ground
floor
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 and the
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second
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floor
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, and the
air
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 outflow zones – the attic and the roof. The most obvious objects,
letting
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air
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to
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apply
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infiltrate into a
house
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, are windows and doors, which could be placed almost in every chamber of the building. Aside from them, another way of
air
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 leaking in is the dryer
vent
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 at the utility space, which typically could be placed
at
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on
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 the ground
floor
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.
Outdoor
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faucet
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 could
also
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 let the
air
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 get into a crawl space. The most amount of
the
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apply
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outdoor
air
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 enters the
house
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at
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on
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 the
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second
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floor
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, where many windows are projected. Except
them
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for them
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,
the
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a
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 kitchen fan
vent
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 is a place of
air
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 entrance.
From the
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The
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 holes in
a
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the
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 roof between
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second
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the second
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floor
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 and the attic heated
in
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apply
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the
house
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air
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 rises, and
then
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 lives the building from the plumbing stack
vent
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 and the bathroom fan
vent
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. To summarize we can conclude, that most of the
air
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 inflows
takes
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take
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 place
into
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on
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 a
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second
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second-floor
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floor
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fool
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full
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 of windows and doors, and
then
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, after rising up after the heating inside the
house
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, it leaves from a plumbing stack
vent
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.

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