You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accommodation with other flat mates. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter, state your reason for writing describe the problems and explain how you feel propose a solution and risk the landlord to take action
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Dear Ms Morris
My name is Chow and I am one of the tenants in your flat. I am writing with the hope to reach a mutual agreement regarding the problems of supplies for hot
water
and heating.
As you might know, the hot water
and heating in our flat have been out of supply for quite some time. Since the weather is freezing in January, I and other tenants find it difficult to sustain our lives without hot water
and heating since we cannot take a shower in recent days and we have to sleep with
wearing a cotton coat. Change preposition
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Therefore
, I feel so disappointed to live in this
way.
I understand that it may take some time for workmen to mend the above problems. Yet it has been two weeks and these problems still cannot be addressed. As our contract clearly has mentioned that the rent of our flat includes functional hot water
and heating supply systems, the situation I am facing right now is clearly not aligned with the rules of our contract. Therefore
, I would be appreciated it if you can solve this
problem in three days or provide our tenants with another place with enough supply of hot water
and heating to live if
you fail to tackle the problem in three days. Change preposition
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Otherwise
, I might search for legislation help to claim my rights.
I am looking forward to your reply. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me. My number is 99999999.
Yours sincerely.
Chow.Submitted by hbljy123 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
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