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Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student's performance. Continual assessment such as course work and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? In what other ways the assessment of a child can be done?

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The diagrams witnessed the attitudes of thousands of
visitors
 to Ashdown
Museum
 before and after
refurbishment
. Overall, post
refurbishment
, the rate of satisfaction among
visitors
 has changed marginally, while that of dissatisfaction has improved significantly.
In addition
 to that, the footfall to the
museum
 has increased after it underwent some changes. Regarding the year before
refurbishment
, 74000, nearly 50% of the respondents were reported to be dissatisfied, having visited the
museum
. That being said, 45% of
visitors
 were contended during their visit to the
museum
,
although
 5% of the respondents were indifferent. As for the year after
refurbishment
, 75% of the
visitors
 experienced content during their visit to the
museum
, while the percentage of people feeling dissatisfied has decreased to 20%, which is at
all time
Add a hyphen
all-time
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 low during the
last
 two years.
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