It is universally accepted that eating too much sugar has a negative effect on people’s health. Therefore, some believe that the government should control the amount of sugar people consume. Others think that it is the responsibility of an individual to monitor their sugar intake. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

High levels of

sugar

commonly known may lead to diabetes mellitus disease. Due to

this

statement, it is widely supported that excess

sugar

has a negative effect on

people

's health. Some

people

think it is the

government

's responsibility to ensure the number of

sugar

people

devours while another group of

people

believes maintaining a healthy

amount

of

sugar

being consumed is solely the individual's responsibility.

Firstly

, the consumable

amount

of

sugar

should be

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controlled control

by the

government

. To strictly carry out

this

plan, Food and Consumables department will have to counter-check the

sugar

content in all types of food, no doubt it will be a lengthy procedure but it will have an effect on

people

.

For example

, the authority can suggest the recipe of types of cookies and advice a favourable

amount

of

sugar

into it.

Besides

that, the

government

can

control

the

amount

of

sugar

being purchased by the

people

.

For instance

, during movement

control

order when our country has a shortage of

sugar

supplies, the

government

strong restrict the number of packets of

sugar

that can be purchased per household.

In addition

, the authority can organise a number of talks which are advised a balanced diet and strongly stress a favourable

amount

of

sugar

that can be consumed to be healthy.

On the other hand

,

individuals

should be responsible for one's self diet and health. Maintaining a safe

amount

of consumable

sugar

shall be controlled by the individual self.

Individuals

must have a strong will to reduce

sugar

intake

every day including during festive seasons when the stalls are flooding with numerous amounts of sugary snacks. It is easier when

individuals

look after their own self

sugar

intake

rather than depending on the

government

. Due to source constraints, the

government

will not able to assess the

sugar

intake

of

individuals

strictly.

Furthermore

, being inspired by the leadership role and information given by the

government

,

people

will easily

control

their

sugar

intake

from daily consumption.

For example

, the

government

ordered that from

next

year onwards, all meals shall be provided with the

sugar

level and calories present in the meal, so that

people

will be aware of the

sugar

quantity in the food. To sum up, I personally agree that

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the

amount

of

sugar

intake

should be the responsibility of

individuals

rather than the

government

.

Individuals

should be responsible for their own's health.