It is universally accepted that eating too much sugar has a negative effect on people’s health. Therefore, some believe that the government should control the amount of sugar people consume. Others think that it is the responsibility of an individual to monitor their sugar intake. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

High levels of

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commonly known may lead to diabetes mellitus disease. Due to

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statement, it is widely supported that excess

sugar

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has a negative effect on

people

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's health. Some

people

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think it is the

government

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's responsibility to ensure the number of

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people

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devours while another group of

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believes maintaining a healthy

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of

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being consumed is solely the individual's responsibility.

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, the consumable

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of

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should be

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controlled control

by the

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. To strictly carry out

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plan, Food and Consumables department will have to counter-check the

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content in all types of food, no doubt it will be a lengthy procedure but it will have an effect on

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.

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, the authority can suggest the recipe of types of cookies and advice a favourable

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of

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into it.

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that, the

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can

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the

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of

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being purchased by the

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.

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, during movement

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order when our country has a shortage of

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supplies, the

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strong restrict the number of packets of

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that can be purchased per household.

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, the authority can organise a number of talks which are advised a balanced diet and strongly stress a favourable

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of

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that can be consumed to be healthy.

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,

individuals

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should be responsible for one's self diet and health. Maintaining a safe

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of consumable

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shall be controlled by the individual self.

Individuals

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must have a strong will to reduce

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intake

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every day including during festive seasons when the stalls are flooding with numerous amounts of sugary snacks. It is easier when

individuals

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look after their own self

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intake

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rather than depending on the

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. Due to source constraints, the

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will not able to assess the

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intake

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of

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strictly.

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, being inspired by the leadership role and information given by the

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,

people

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will easily

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their

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intake

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from daily consumption.

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, the

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ordered that from

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year onwards, all meals shall be provided with the

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level and calories present in the meal, so that

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will be aware of the

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quantity in the food. To sum up, I personally agree that

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the

amount

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of

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intake

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should be the responsibility of

individuals

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rather than the

government

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.

Individuals

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should be responsible for their own's health.