You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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Dear Mr Adam With due respect, I (Maham Alvi) who enrolled in your graphic designing evening

course

which was starting on the

first

week of January, I am writing to inform you that It is now difficult for me to attend the part-time

course

classes because I am transferred to the new branch of my office which is in Dubai. As you know that I am a Mechanical Engineer working in a reputed organization for the

last

ten years, due to my hard work and constant efforts, I am now promoted to branch manager of a newly constructed office in Dubai which means I have to shift completely from Pakistan to Dubai.

This

part-time

course

is a great source of skill for me but unfortunately, I would not be able to continue

this

opportunity. Please let me know if there are any online classes available for

such

courses or any possibility of taking the remaining classes during my one-week holidays in Pakistan. You can contact me at the above-mentioned address or telephone number. I hope

this

course

would be a great success for all the students. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely Maham Alvi

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