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Traffic jam brings a lot of problems to our life. What are the problems? What are the solutions?

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The world is moving at a rapid pace. Modernization is the essence of a booming society. The population in our society is expanding at an alarming rate. To cope with the commute-related needs of our masses, the number of
vehicles
 is rising at a sharp pace. I strongly feel the rising vehicle number is going to be a matter of crisis
for
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 the future.
Firstly
, the rising number of
vehicles
causes
 traffic congestion.
This
 provides an irritable atmosphere to the person behind the wheel.
Secondly
, the jam created
causes
 a rise in the noise level, causing noise
pollution
.
Additionally
, it
also
 leads to air
pollution
. The emission from
vehicles
 when moving at a slower rate
causes
 increased fuel combustion and air
pollution
. Sound
pollution
causes
 harm to
hear
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,
causes
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and causes
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 palpitation for the elderly and people with heart conditions.
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,
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air
pollution
causes
 conditions like wheezing and asthma. Children are at a particularly higher risk for these conditions. For elders, diseases like lung cancer and chronic pulmonary lung disease are more prevalent. The higher sound levels are known to harm animals and cause anxiety and aggression. The way to combat
this
 issue is possible only if we work united. It should be a mass initiative. Children should be educated about the ill effects of rising noise levels . The craze for owning
vehicles
 individually should be stopped. The multitude should be encouraged to use public transport or start carpooling. To conclude, I would like to reiterate my opinion by saying that people must strictly bring changes to combat the problem of traffic jams before irreversible damage is done.
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