The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagrams illustrate the present layout of a university's game area and
also
the changes proposed for the future .
To begin
with , presently there is a reception in front of the entrance .
Moreover
, the 25 m pool is in the centre of the map with changing room , gym and seating area on the northwest, north and northeast sides respectively.
In addition
to
this
, the outdoor courts are present on the west and east side . Moving towards the map of the future , the location of the pool , changing room and reception will remain the same .
Whereas
the size of hun expands with two dance studios connected with it . Apart from ,
this
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the outdoor courts will be demarcated as a leisure pool and sports hall .
Additionally
, changing rooms will be built in the southwest and southeast with a sports shop and cafe beside them respectively .
Overall
, it is apparent that new changes have been planned for the future . ,
Also
outdoor courts are demolished
due to
new addition .
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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