The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given diagrams illustrate the present layout of a university's game area and

also

the changes proposed for the future .

To begin

with , presently there is a reception in front of the entrance .

Moreover

, the 25 m pool is in the centre of the map with changing room , gym and seating area on the northwest, north and northeast sides respectively.

In addition

this

, the outdoor courts are present on the west and east side . Moving towards the map of the future , the location of the pool , changing room and reception will remain the same .

Whereas

the size of hun expands with two dance studios connected with it . Apart from ,

this

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the outdoor courts will be demarcated as a leisure pool and sports hall .

Additionally

, changing rooms will be built in the southwest and southeast with a sports shop and cafe beside them respectively .

Overall

, it is apparent that new changes have been planned for the future . ,

Also

outdoor courts are demolished

due to

new addition .

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