Peoples shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than any other factor to what extent you agree or disagree?

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Shopping plays an important role in our consumer culture, and some
people
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consider that
shopping
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the shopping
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preference
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preferences
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of
people
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is determined primarily by their
age
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. In that case, while I embrace the notion, I believe that
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age
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, there are other significant factors in shaping shopping habits. It goes without saying that
age
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is a major factor in consumer behaviour. As demands of youth differ from middle-aged
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and the old. Showing one’s own
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is a key reason for
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of youth, but the determinant of middle-aged
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is the
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and comfortableness of the products.
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, young
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prefer to buy a new feather coat which leads
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latest fashion trend with
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designed
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while the old
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care
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more
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about the price and warmth degree rather than style.
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,
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does influence shopping habits.
However
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, there are several other factors, which make a big difference
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shopping
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the shopping
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choices of customers.
Firstly
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, gender is another determinant of consumption, showing typically in the selection of products.
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, women’s
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of
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cosmetics are obviously more than
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counterparts
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of men,
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the interests
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high-tech goods of men are more than women.
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, lifestyle
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is another factor
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habit
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the habit
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of shopping.
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Sports men
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show more
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preferences
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preference
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on
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healthy equipment
such
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as
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sports
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bicycles, yoga rugs and running machines, while commuters spend
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fast
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food
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and public transport tickets maybe more than other
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. All
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explain that
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consumption
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depend on diversity factors. In conclusion, the
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of customers are determined by
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, gender,
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lifestyle
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and so on. It is not wise to say that the
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of
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customers
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depend on a single case.
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