Many people believe that modern music can have a negative impact on the young. Others believe the effect of modern music is positive. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is true that

music

has become a universal language across the world influencing many people from old to

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young.

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industry produces a wide variety of songs each year, but the question of whether

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has either

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or negative impact on youth is up for debate.

To begin

with, current hits cover

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topics as violence, terrorism, racism and different political issues and in many cases, they use explicit language to deliver their messages to the public.

For instance

, rock and rap

music

are full of rude expressions and foul language.

As a result

,

this

kind of

music

is really harmful

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youngsters because the psychological state of their minds is easily influenced and may look at these musical artists as

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model

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, trying to imitate their inappropriate style of conversation.

Consequently

,

this

type of

music

covers heavy issues and proves to have a poor influence on

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youngsters.

On the other hand

, some critics claim that modern melodies are more catchy and better sounding than the tunes made by the previous generation of artists. Nowadays, thank

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internet

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, youth can listen to any type of

music

, from all around the world. Recent research has proven that more than 73% of adolescents managed to socialize easier with their

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thanks to

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. It goes without saying that being

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fans of the same group

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people, they feel like they belong to a larger community. In conclusion, personally, I believe that modern songs have more of a negative effect rather than a positive one. Albeit it can be changed, provided that it doesn’t use explicit lyrics and start covering lighter topics to make people more positive rather than depressed and anxious. Originally

music

was invented to make our life more joyful, not sadder.