Some people think a country benefits from a large proportion of young university students, others think sending young people to universities only leads to believe graduate unemployment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many individuals believe that with advanced education, the

number

of undergraduates has been increasing. Some argue that a large

number

of

university

students

will increase the unemployment rate of high-educated people and it is not beneficial for

society

. From my perspective, I would say that a large proportion of young

university

students

have positive effects on

society

. On the one hand, there are some disadvantages to the increasing

number

of undergraduates.

To begin

with, many young people tend to go to

university

after graduating from high school. Because of

this

, some people could apply for admission to

university

without enough to think about what they want to be.

Therefore

, there is a lot of competition in

this

majority which makes these

students

likely to be unsatisfied with their major.

In other words

, a lack of confidence in their major could lead to failure in finding their jobs.

On the other hand

, I believe that a large proportion of young

university

students

positively influence

society

.

Firstly

, the quality of these

students

is warranted because of the

university

programmes.

This

is because these

students

can improve their ability through these programmes, competing with their peers.

As a result

, these

students

after graduating will become high-technique employees rather than physical workers with no more degrees from a

university

. In conclusion,

although

the increasing

number

of undergraduates could make negative impacts on individuals and

society

because of creating many competitions, I believe that it would bring more advantages for the country.