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increment of prices in petro is best solution for traffic and environmental problems

#increment #prices #petro #traffic
The diagram illustrates the
emission
 of Carbon Dioxide per
person
 in four different countries, namely The
UK
,
Sweden
, Italy, and Portugal, between 1967 and 2007. In general, of all the countries, the
UK
 records the highest
emission
 of CO2 per
person
 during the period in question, whereas, Portugal witnessed the opposite trend.
In addition
 to that, the average
emission
 of Carbon Dioxide per
person
 was almost identical in 1987 for both
Sweden
 and Italy. Regarding
Sweden
 and Italy, the
emission
 of CO2 per
person
 in
Sweden
 declined rapidly in 1987 before rising in 1977, touching slightly more than 7 units, while that of the latter rose marginally in 1987 and, following
this
 trend, it was hovering at almost 7 units in the following year. As for the
UK
 and Portugal,
although
 the
emission
 per
person
 was the highest for the
UK
 throughout the period, it declined statically from 1967 to 2007.
Furthermore
, Portugal experienced a polar opposite scenario before it levelled off in 1997 at nearly 5 units.
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