A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday. • Describe some possible disadvantages. • Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer.
Dear Brown,
How have you been? Hope you're doing well these days. I was thrilled to open your letter yesterday in which you were asking me for my opinion on a campsite vacation.
Initially
, I want to enlighten you to tell you that it would be a great idea to plan such
holidays as I'm already well aware of your adventurous nature. In reference to this
, I think you would enjoy extreme sports such
as hiking, paragliding and caving in Bir Billing which is famous for it.
However
, I want to alert you that while doing these risky tasks as they involve certain hazardous elements, you must hire experts and perform them under their supervision. Moreover
, there might be some discomfort due to climate change so you should pack your stuff after checking weather forecasting.
Lastly
, I'm giving you these pieces of advice since I can't make it this
summer. Unfortunately, I have to go to Australia for a business trip that's why I'll be busy for the entire month but I hope you'll enjoy this
trip.
Drop me a line if you need some assistance.
Lots of love,
AmmySubmitted by immysandhu94 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite