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Sales companies often try to recruit people who are motivated by money, as they believe that it will make them work harder. do you believe people are motivated to work hard by money and what other factors should be considered when searching for new sales staff?

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Marketing organizations often consider and it seems true too that monetary perks can help to achieve
best
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 output from a
person
.
Although
 there are many other factors
for example
 a
person
’s
behavior
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, loyalty, sincerity, attitude toward
job
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, education and prior experience cannot be overlooked while hiring someone. In
following
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 paragraphs will talk about both perspectives in detail. On the one hand, having enough money and
to be
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 able to
feeding
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 your family in
an
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 respectable way is
ones
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 responsibility.
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 them with the basic need of life is always prioritized by an individual,
hence
 luring someone with tempting incentives and salary can get the best out of a
person
however
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,
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 If you have a roof over the head, food to eat, and money to educate your offspring you would not be all the time worried and can focus more on your
job
 and progression of
company
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, which in turn will yield more profit and expansion for the company.
For example
, most managers don't mind staying late to complete their tasks.
On the other hand
, a
person
’s background or earlier work experience is
also
 a key requirement while recruiting
for example
 latest research published in the Paris newspaper highlighted the point that most
of
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employers
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 prefer to hire a
person
 with already good command of their work so that, they can immediately start and there would be no need of orientation sessions and waste of time on training for specific
job
 requirements. It is said that
filled
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 tummy and
out of
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worries
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 mind
works
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 better. If the
sales
 company would cater for these along with other prerequisites/ requirements for
sales
job
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, it will accrue better
sales
 vis
a vis profits
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. Proverbs in some cases
goes
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 well that the employee earns his incentives by himself”
”
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 In conclusion, higher salaries and
sales
 commissions can move a
person
 in the organization for more productivity but other characteristics
be
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also
 given due consideration.
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