Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole.

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It is believed by some that avoiding

fish

and

meat

is not benefiting only their health, but

also

the whole world. I believe that

this

is an unnecessary mindset, which is crucial for some people’s health and

way

of fighting with

against nature’s laws. Eating

meat

and

fish

can be

unacceptful

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unacceptable

unacceptable for the vegetarian society due to these individuals’

way

of thinking and they’re leading healthier

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life

lives

lifes

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lives

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lives and stopping the

animal’s

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animal

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world from extinction.

However

, even though these people’s morals are not wrong, I do not accept them fully. In my opinion, eating other living species is the

way

the food chain is working. The same ways /

way

tigers eat hiennahs.

Although

, there is nothing wrong with protecting other breathing creatures, there are a number of factors why it is harmful to some human’s /human organisms.

For instance

, I have a friend that stopped eating

meat

and

fish

. Even though she

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feels

feeled

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felt

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felt calmer for not being accountable for a cow’s death, she started feeling dizzy, sick and out of energy. Afterwards, she went to the doctor only to find out that her body is not responding well to the lack of nutrients

meat

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in meat

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and

fish

gained her.

Consequently

, the doctor prescribed her these supplements she had to take

instead

fish

and

meat

. In conclusion, people should not walk towards

Mother’s

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Mother

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nature, but learn how to value our resources. If we were more reasonable

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apply

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in the

way

we hunt animals,

this

topic would not be an issue for some activists.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Grammar mistakes
 

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249 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Plant-based diet
Chronic diseases
Greenhouse gas emissions
Deforestation
Water consumption
Mitigate climate change
Natural resources
Animal welfare
Humane and ethical choice
Healthcare costs
Sustainable farming
Legumes
Fruits and vegetables
Vegetarian
Vegan

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