Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole.

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It is believed by some that avoiding
fish
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and
meat
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is not benefiting only their health, but
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the whole world. I believe that
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is an unnecessary mindset, which is crucial for some people’s health and
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of fighting with
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against nature’s laws. Eating
meat
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and
fish
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can be
unacceptful
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unacceptable
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unacceptable for the vegetarian society due to these individuals’
way
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of thinking and they’re leading healthier
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life
lives
lifes
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lives
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/
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lives and stopping the
animal’s
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world from extinction.
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, even though these people’s morals are not wrong, I do not accept them fully. In my opinion, eating other living species is the
way
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the food chain is working. The same ways /
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tigers eat hiennahs.
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, there is nothing wrong with protecting other breathing creatures, there are a number of factors why it is harmful to some human’s /human organisms.
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, I have a friend that stopped eating
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and
fish
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. Even though she
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feels
feeled
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felt
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/
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felt calmer for not being accountable for a cow’s death, she started feeling dizzy, sick and out of energy. Afterwards, she went to the doctor only to find out that her body is not responding well to the lack of nutrients
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meat
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in meat
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and
fish
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gained her.
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, the doctor prescribed her these supplements she had to take
instead
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of
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and
meat
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. In conclusion, people should not walk towards
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nature, but learn how to value our resources. If we were more reasonable
on
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apply
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in the
way
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we hunt animals,
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topic would not be an issue for some activists.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Plant-based diet
  • Chronic diseases
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Deforestation
  • Water consumption
  • Mitigate climate change
  • Natural resources
  • Animal welfare
  • Humane and ethical choice
  • Healthcare costs
  • Sustainable farming
  • Legumes
  • Fruits and vegetables
  • Vegetarian
  • Vegan
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