Some people believe that part time job can ensure better job opportunities in future. Others think job can easily distract students from study. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the present age, a debate has been going on regarding part-time jobs for students during studying. Many people would assume that it is quite beneficial for pupils to experience a working pattern on them, whereas others would argue that

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and most importantly, experience in the sphere of

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provides vital knowledge for

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future life. To be more exact, decent practice in a work field enhances one's logical mindset developing

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of creativity in the hard period of time when innovative decisions are needed. The reason for

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point is that experience in complex situations and finding various solutions develops critical thinking, which undoubtedly is quite useful for the upcoming obstacles in life.

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, an understanding of the work system can effectively ease your future existence and assist in outcoming complicated situations. In the contrast,

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fade on and slow down the process of achieving academic pinnacles. Since education requests a great deal of time from a student, as it is mostly expected for a kid to get well in all spheres in school, a part-time

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would take away the precious time for pulling off

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expectation. School education is crucial for reaching your specific targets in life,

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decent place at work, all of

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previous studying. Considering the discussion above, as it is pretty beneficial to pursue a part-time

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since it provides plenty of advantages, I would assume that it is more important for a pupil to concentrate on education, because of its superior outcome in the future.