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Some people believe that it is good for students to have the same teacher for several years. Others think students benefit more from having new teachers each year. Which do you think is better? Give specific reasons to support your opinion.

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Nowadays, people are arguing about having the same teacher or having a new teacher in
meantime
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the meantime
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of
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learning
education
. In my opinion, it is good to have a different one because it will give some new fresh skills for learning. Different
teachers
 can give a new environment for students.
Therefore
, all people have a unique style to adapt their knowledge,
this
 is
also
 another options way to study because all
teachers
 have a different way to teach students. So the student will not bored with the same learning skill.
Therefore
 the
education
 level is not the same for all
level
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levels
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 of
education
.
For example
,
high
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for high
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 school
education
 and university,
this
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apply
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will need more advanced
education
 way, I believe all the
teachers
 have a limited scope to teach their teaching.
Finally
. new
teachers
 each year is absolutely good for a student to improve their
education
 and have some refreshments every year.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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