Describe how instant noodles are manufactured. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram illustrates the procedure of noodle manufacturing in a company in 8 different steps. In the beginning, the big vehicle puts the flour into the storage silos. In the
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, the mixer mixes the oil, water, and flour and after that, they move to the
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stage, have a shape change and turn
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dough sheets by the rollers. Again, in the fourth
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, we can see an appearance change; the sheets become dough strips. At the beginning of the
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half of the process, the dough strips dramatically changed in their shape and become noodles disc,
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like a circle. In the sixth
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, they are fried in the oil and
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they become dry. In the
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, dry cooked noodles are put into cups by the machine and
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the machine adds various kinds of flavours or some other tasty things, like vegetables or spices to them. In the
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, some labels are stuck on the noodles cup and
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the machine steals them and they become ready to get out of the factory.
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