You borrowed something from your friend, later it got damaged. Write letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: • apology about the issue • tell how it got damaged • say you are going to fix this issue.

#friend #apology

Dear Raman, I hope

this

letter finds you in the best of your spirits. I am writing

this

letter to feel sorry about your laptop that got damaged by me accidentally.

Last

week, while I was going to my college and on my way and I was hit by a car.

As a result

, I fell down and I was carrying your laptop in my backpack. Later, when I checked I found out that the laptop's screen was damaged. When I tried to run it, the display went black. I had shown it to a mechanic and after checking it thoroughly, he suggested I take it to the company-authorised service centre and there they advised me to go for a new display as other things were intact inside its body. I apologise for my mistake and I will pay the repair expenses . I hope you would understand

this

whole episode and I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Lovingly,

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5 paragraphs

161 words

9.00

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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