You borrowed something from your friend, later it got damaged. Write letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: • apology about the issue • tell how it got damaged • say you are going to fix this issue.

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Dear Raman, I hope

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letter finds you in the best of your spirits. I am writing

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letter to feel sorry about your laptop that got damaged by me accidentally.

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week, while I was going to my college and on my way and I was hit by a car.

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, I fell down and I was carrying your laptop in my backpack. Later, when I checked I found out that the laptop's screen was damaged. When I tried to run it, the display went black. I had shown it to a mechanic and after checking it thoroughly, he suggested I take it to the company-authorised service centre and there they advised me to go for a new display as other things were intact inside its body. I apologise for my mistake and I will pay the repair expenses . I hope you would understand

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whole episode and I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Lovingly,

parmarjas3Thu Oct 27 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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5 paragraphs

161 words

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You borrowed something from your friend, later it got damaged. Write letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: • apology about the issue • tell how it got damaged • say you are going to fix this issue.

Individuals frequently opt to watch foreign movies instead of local ones. However, though I vehemently agree with such a statement, I believe that the government should provide economic incentives to bolster national film industries.

Some argue that music mainly serves as a way for individuals to reduce their stress and anxiety. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Write a letter to the bus company. In your letter, inform the bus company of when and to where you travelled describe your suitcase and what happened to it explain why the company should pay for a new suitcase

Your Friend wants to send his/her children to your house for the weekend. Write a letter to him/her and say: - Agree to this arrangement - Say what time is suitable for you - Describe what are you planning to do

Nowadays many young people leave home at an early age and live in a city. Why do you think they move to cities? Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages for young people?