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Nowadays, more and more foreign students are going to English-Speaking countries to learn the “international language – English". It is undoubtedly true that studying English in an English-speaking country is the best way, but it is not the only way to learn it. Do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

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Nowadays, it is true that the number of foreign students who are going to
English
-speaking nations is increasing to learn
English
, which is known as an international language.While
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 it is undoubtedly true that
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studying
English
 in an
English
-speaking nation is the best method, it is not the only
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 to learn it.Personally, I partly agree with
this
 point of view. On the one hand, there are several reasons why we should learn
English
 in an
English
-speaking nation.
Firstly
, we can interact with
teachers
 who live in
English
-speaking nations on a daily basis.
Therefore
, we will have to communicate with them
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english
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.If they do not understand what we said, they will
must
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learn
english
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everyday
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 to they
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understand.Since
then
,our
english
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 level will be better.
Furthermore
, the pronunciation of native speakers
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 better than
the
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teachers
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 who
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 not foreign.So, we can learn
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pronounce
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 and if we want to study abroad in the future, it will easily for
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 to adapt to live environment of their country.
On the other hand
, we can learn
English
 in other ways.The
first
 reason is that we learn
english
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 in some famous
English
center
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 in our hometown, it is cheaper than that of
English
-speaking nations.
For example
, in some
English
center
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,
they
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have plenty of
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teachers
, up-to-date infrastructure and courses available, they even have foreign
teachers
, but we spend less money.
In addition
, we can learn
English
 by free documents on
facebook
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, google to improve our
english
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English
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 level and
watch
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 videos ,
movies
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 on youtube to learn
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.Thanks to
find
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 free documents on the internet, we can learn
English
 better at home without spending a lot of money. In conclusion, I strongly believe that
although
 learning
English
 in
English
-speaking countries is the best method, we can
also
 learn
English
 in a range of different ways.Personally, I partly agree with
this
 idea.
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