Some people believe that children’s time outside of school should be filled with scheduled activities such as art and music classes and sports. Others feel that children need free time to play and relax. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A highly controversial topic relates to whether children should be allowed free play after school time or

participated

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participate

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in other skill classes. In

this

essay, I will examine

this

question and

then

explain why I believe that schedules for studying and relaxing should be moderated. There are parents who are convinced that non-academic skills play an essential role for their sons and daughters. The major reason for believing in

this

is a well-equipped child with knowledge in various aspects will have more chance to be successful in their future. It is

also

possible to say that

this

youngster can realise his or her talent in the early of their life and

then

concentrate on training to become an expert in the near future. To illustrate

this

, Leone Messi was acknowledged for his talent in football by his coach when he was in primary school and now he

became

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has become

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a high-profile soccer striker.

On the other hand

, others believe that childhood should be fulfilled by pleasures after study time. It is often argued that the pressure of learning at school nowadays is putting a harsh burden on children's backs

therefore

they need to enjoy free time for playing with their friends and have and having stable upbringing.

Moreover

, some parents register too many classes for their child without concern about the strengths and hobbies of

this

kid leading to many serious problems

such

as depression.

For instance

that

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according to

UNICEF, the juvenile psychological disorder rate caused by overload studies in many countries is alarming significantly. In conclusion, I am of the opinion that both arguments have their merits. On balance,

however

, I feel that It is beneficial to excavate children's talent early yet mothers and fathers should balance their offspring's schedule between relaxation and learning.